SHERI REDA Reviews
Port Light by William Allegrezza
(Meritage Press, San Francisco & St. Helena,
Hay(na)ku is a literary form invented by poet Eileen Tabios,
who first experimented with sets of six-word poems: one in the first line, two
in the second line, and three in the third line (syllables are not restricted).
Hay Naku is also the perfect slang
expression for a poet. A sort of OMG in
actual language, it can carry both the wow
of appreciative wonder and the dismayed ugh
of disgust. In Port Light, William
Allegrezza uses the form to explore and expand the concept, which lurks in
personal moments, social conditions, and the dismaying prospects before our
species.
Allegrezza’s opening poem,
“Lessons,” includes a heartbreaking record of the sudden panic that emerges
when we suddenly see the cheap fragility of our made world and the
vulnerability of our children within it:
i
know
that some
things once ruptured
are broken beyond
repair.
The honesty in these pointilistic verses is unremitting,
reminding the reader at once that “inner / darkness” is always handy, just
before our closed eyes.
Allegrezza ventures from the
personal to the political in poems such as “atomic,” “politics,” and “Through
Having Been,” and ventures into the industrial in poems such as “edge” and “
city.” Even as these poems retain their structural limits, their categories refuse
to retain their boundaries. The poem “our
time” goes further. It is a meditation on both the industrial and the
cosmological, in which Allegrezza observes that
nothing (and there
is
no causation)
else is closer
to
breath than
the head altered
subsistence
in this
our urban space.
These set the scene for the
masterpiece of hay(na)ku that is the
poem “foundling.” Here, the overall structure remains intact, but grammar and
meaning fracture exactly as the psyche does when events turn the screws on our
expectations. Punctuation is used effectively as direction in several poems
here, including “the dance.”
Even structure is stretched when
Allegrezza partners with Eileen Tabios on “Response poems.” Here, in a form
known as “hayburn,” Tabios writes prose poetry in response to each stanza of
Allegrezza’s poem, creating a call-and-response between voices that highlight
and offset one another.
In an effective arrangement that gathers
the individual poems into a whole, Allegrezza’s explorations build upon each
other if to gather them up into a self that can explore further and more fully.
With increased frankness and vulnerability, the final poems in this collection
suggest the primacy of the personal relationship between the individual and the
world. My favorite poem in this collection is
“between us,” a confession that pierces the heart:
between us
i
have borrowed
a self that
I
set upon
the table, and
it
speaks in
clear ways that
i
cannot.
Still, it may be that he rightfully
saved the most important for last. Allegrezza closes with an urging, in
“envoy,” that we “unwrap” and “scatter” his words, or perhaps our words, as
tools for the survival and wellbeing of all.
*****
Sheri Reda is a professional writer, librarian, and life-cycle
celebrant—and a frequent storyteller in Chicago’s live-lit community. She is
also the author of the recently published locofo chapbook entitled Stubborn,
which can be found and purchased at http://www.moriapoetry.com/locofo.html
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